Good observations @timk11 
I concur
There are 3 other proposals with the same sorts of issues:
There are 2 more which mostly seem good, but I have some outstanding questions about them:
@sat and/or @SvenF would you be up for announcing future Subnet Management proposals on this thread and/or on the relevant subnet-specific thread?
It would be great if you could then also provide a link to the post in the proposal that’s raised. Otherwise it’s hard for most voters to see and understand the context and discussion relating to the proposal (which is surely very important).